Monday, 8 February 2010

My Ideas 3





When i looked over the storyboards i previously drew i realised it was not clear why she decided to take her life.. The audience do not get to see any other part of her life so i have added in some flashbacks as I think it then shows why she has come to her decision and does not just leave the audience completely confused and not knowing what is going on.

I got a bit confused with the sounds and music throughout my piece and have realised...
  • The sound of the trains will be diegetic as the character will be at the station
  • All the voice overs will be non-diegetic
  • The music at the party will be diegetic
  • The speech during the argument with her mother will be diegetic

2 comments:

  1. well done, danielle - glad you spottted the confusion with diegetic and non-diegetic!

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  2. Keep up the blogging Danielle - little and often - research into your target audience and the market for your product are essential.

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